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Thursday, 07 April 2005

 F Train to Paris: It's a mommy blog, an expat blog, a Jewish blog--and for today only, it's a poetry blog. My son R. (age 12), better known as a performer than a writer, produced the following poems in English class this week, and his proud mom wants to share them with the world.

A Martian Sends a Letter Home
Sometimes a mixture of colors leak from the world’s seams
Creating a semi circle of joy and  luck

But this only happens after the sky cries for the land
Making everything slippery and wet

 The big yellow ball doesn’t hide in shame in
 The beautiful blue skies behind the mass of pillows
 
 When the sky turns a rich shade of black
 Stars on the street shine brighter than ever

 And all the people run into their boxes
 Where they feel safe with their companions
 
 Where they lay eyes wide shut in fear
 Slowly dying fading into blackness where the color hides

 
Silence
Shhh! be quiet my son
For the time of silence has just begun 

A time when you can hear things
That you’ve never heard before

Like the blooming of a flower
And the creaking of the floor

And this my son
Is the time when you can hear much more
 
Quiet

Quiet is the time of day
When sounds of rarity come out to play
But on the occasion of someone loud
they’ll quickly run away

Quiet is the time of day
When you can hear the movement of the moon
And the crickets’ lovely tune
But if you’re loud like you and me
They’ll flee

Quiet is the time of day
That’s quite enough
For the clouds to fluff
And the dogs to make their silent “ruff”
But if you make a single sound
They’ll bound

So if you’re smart

You’ll take part
And be like everyone one else
Stay as quiet as a mouse


posted by: pariskleinmans at 12:15 | link | comments (5) |


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#1  07 April 2005 - 12:38
 
impressive work for 12.
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#2  07 April 2005 - 15:43
 
Wow, that was better than most poetry that adults write, really.

You should encourage him to continue exploring this outlet!
Anonymous
#3  08 April 2005 - 04:31
 
It makes grandparents proud to read such sophisticated stuff.LOVE, Grandma and Zaidy
Anonymous
#4  14 April 2005 - 20:27
 
Hey Roger, ai ai ai! I love your words. I'm going to share them with my daughter (4) whose mother also keeps her name limited to E. on her blog.

Keep writing...I'm inspired to go write some myself.
K.
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#5  15 June 2005 - 04:53
 
This is so good! I really like it!

Michael
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